by Jason Sep 7, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
I used to write tight poems, |
by Swe3t 16
I like this poem, I think it has a good message, I'm not so sure if the message is CLEAR CLEAR.. but you it gets confusing when you write "type of poems" alot, I mean I just think if there was a bit more expanding of the sentences it would be really realy good, but that's just my opion I mean, you are a really good writer, |