by Poetess Lana Sep 7, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Wash away the pain in the |
by Chelsey
Very emotional and heartbreaking. Excellent job with the flow and format of the poem. The tone created in this touched the senses and established a tasteful atmosphere. Truly wonderful. :] |
by Tammie
Aww! That's so sad. You wrote it beautifully, and i could just feel the heartache from this. You did a great job. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5 |