Nicely done my friend. I love it.

Such a wonderful poem. Quite appitizing to the mind and soul.

Very, very nice, great write Simon!!!

My hats off to you my friend what an incredible poem I myself took this to be that rarest of all poems a truly romantic erotic poem done so well without any of the suggestive or bsomewhat obsene words that keep cropping up in my poems.I have truly missed your writing and I'm looking foreward to catching up
Tim

Simon, I really hope you saved me some because it sounds positively delightful.This is an outstanding poem. It made my mouth water!

Man your naking my heart bleed! I envy such heavenly pleasures! 5/5
You a great poet!