by ♥OnLy OnE hEaRt To GiVe♥ Sep 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Time, sometimes the time just slips away |
by Jess
I really love this poem, the repetition slows it down and makes the reader think more about all the emotions behind this and what you really want to say. the rhyming also makes it flow really well, so everyone else can understand the pain. it sounds almost like a song! :) dont stop writing xxx |