Slow Road

by Katran   Sep 8, 2006


Can you all sense it?
Change is in the air
I can feel the way it bristles
Each and every hair

My mind is quickly responding
Before my body has a chance
It will be only so long
Before I realize the master plan

Old habits are re-awakened
New ones found on the way
The ending will be simple
The hard part is today

If I can fight my human weakness
If I can control my every breath
Only then can I start to relish
This long, slow road, to death

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  • 18 years ago

    by .]Robz[.

    I can honestly say this poem is top-notch. I can't say I can relate to this poemm but I understand every single word from it. This part:

    "Old habits are re-awakened
    New ones found on the way
    The ending will be simple
    The hard part is today"

    It should be henceforth be known as a proverb.

    Great work! You have amazing talent.

  • 18 years ago

    by X~Angie~X

    Wow amazing.. i kno how u feel. i can relate to this poem. its veyr sad and eveyrthing.i loev how u wrote this and everythign. it makes me sad tho.. cuz i can relate.. ne ways amazing poem. so good. keep on writing
    take care
    luve angie