Sorry Note

by Cristian Teo Regalado   Sep 8, 2006


This is a sorry not I'm making for a girl named Brooke,
Just letting you know my heart took a big shook,
Cause I'm scared to loose such a special girl,
One that means so much to me in this world,
So much love for you I can't explain,
Thinking about it so much hurts my brain,

So much love for you and so many emotions,
I got more love for you then there are gallons in the ocean,
You can say infinity plus one,
Because my love for you will never be done,
Not after a million fights,
Cause we can fight all day but I'll still love you at night,

I'm saying sorry for hurting you but I hurt myself more,
I just hope my chance didn't walk out the door,
I just can't explain how sorry I'm to you,
And I can't explain either my pure love and how much its true,
Talking to you just makes my day lit,
A life without you is like an endless pit,

Brooke I hope you forgive me in this life,
Cause if you don't it will be my main strife,
Brooke if I had to rate you one to ten,
I would give you a fifteen over and over again,
I'm letting you know my love for you I'm gonna have to mend,
I'm really trying to say I want you to be my Girl-Friend...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Wow...that was some good stuff..amazing

  • 17 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Nice work dude...love the flow and i understand where your going with this...i hope it turned out good in the end....lay...

    matt

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    Yes abousoltly Brillent!! I loved it, hey just be sure to read and watch carefully on the main purpose of your poem and stay consitenent,In the beginng of your work you talk so much about how you love and how you hurt her(this made the reader beleve that you all are already together,But great work just wacth where you put each stanza

  • 18 years ago

    by Aussie

    WOw, that takes an amazing gift to write that well. cool how u make it seem so bad to realy be wouderful. it is very deep. u can't stop reading it.
    GRADUATIONS:)

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