by Cristian Teo Regalado Sep 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
This is a sorry not I'm making for a girl named Brooke, |
Wow...that was some good stuff..amazing |
by Matthew A.
Nice work dude...love the flow and i understand where your going with this...i hope it turned out good in the end....lay... |
by Marcus
Yes abousoltly Brillent!! I loved it, hey just be sure to read and watch carefully on the main purpose of your poem and stay consitenent,In the beginng of your work you talk so much about how you love and how you hurt her(this made the reader beleve that you all are already together,But great work just wacth where you put each stanza |
by Aussie
WOw, that takes an amazing gift to write that well. cool how u make it seem so bad to realy be wouderful. it is very deep. u can't stop reading it. |