WOw, that takes an amazing gift to write that well. cool how u make it seem so bad to realy be wouderful. it is very deep. u can't stop reading it.
GRADUATIONS:)

Yes abousoltly Brillent!! I loved it, hey just be sure to read and watch carefully on the main purpose of your poem and stay consitenent,In the beginng of your work you talk so much about how you love and how you hurt her(this made the reader beleve that you all are already together,But great work just wacth where you put each stanza

Nice work dude...love the flow and i understand where your going with this...i hope it turned out good in the end....lay...

matt

Wow...that was some good stuff..amazing