Comments : Live With Me In My Grave

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    That was really pretty and cute, good words well done xox sam

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    Hey Nitin!
    this is absolutely outstanding,your poems are very enjoyable to read..very heartfelt!

    I dunno what else to say, but you're doin' a great job until now..I know You'll be taking care of your poetry always and forever =)

    Best Of Luck
    NemO xxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    It was a very beautiful poem, my friend! Kind of sad too, but as all your poems they are amazingly written and sweetly worded! You can write the most heartfelt lines no matter the topic or the length of the poem, and that makes you a great writer! So keep writing like that! 5/5
    Love,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great writing, Nitin! your title is exceptionally powerful.

    good luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. this was a beautiful poem, and you wrote it so well.. i loved the way you wrote. i loved the words you used, and the heart and soul that you put into it!!! 5/5
    Please can you rate and comment on my poems?.. Thanks..
    Best Wishes..
    Kirsty xx

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Why is this poem so low i really liked the wau u described urself. very well written. beautifully worded. very touching keep it up xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    Amazing write. I loved this. I can somewhat relate to this. Beautiful piece here...keep it up! 5/5

    - Poetess

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wow greAT ending yaar...
    nice poem i liked the meaning behind it...5/5

    :)
    sonam

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    Oh, what a poem. Day by day you're getting better at writing these ironic love poems. As I read all the comments, I see that everyone loves the way you wrote it and and meaning of it. And it makes me smile, because only a blind can understand his darkness. Anyways, awesome poem. I really loved it.

    Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "i know you look at my fading picture too"

    For some reason that line got to my heart. I don't know why but i felt a pang as i read it.
    My only option is to conclude that your poetry gets to my heart.
    So well done to you =)
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad and so beautiful! excellent writing!