by Lithium
That was really pretty and cute, good words well done xox sam |
by Nee
Hey Nitin! |
It was a very beautiful poem, my friend! Kind of sad too, but as all your poems they are amazingly written and sweetly worded! You can write the most heartfelt lines no matter the topic or the length of the poem, and that makes you a great writer! So keep writing like that! 5/5 |
by shobhana kumar
Great writing, Nitin! your title is exceptionally powerful. |
Wow.. this was a beautiful poem, and you wrote it so well.. i loved the way you wrote. i loved the words you used, and the heart and soul that you put into it!!! 5/5 |
by dora
Why is this poem so low i really liked the wau u described urself. very well written. beautifully worded. very touching keep it up xx |
by Liz
Amazing write. I loved this. I can somewhat relate to this. Beautiful piece here...keep it up! 5/5 |
by bOlly danCer
Wow greAT ending yaar... |
Oh, what a poem. Day by day you're getting better at writing these ironic love poems. As I read all the comments, I see that everyone loves the way you wrote it and and meaning of it. And it makes me smile, because only a blind can understand his darkness. Anyways, awesome poem. I really loved it. |
by Gem
"i know you look at my fading picture too" |
by Cindy
This is so sad and so beautiful! excellent writing! |