Aww, it was really...deep! Awesome lyrics, I loved the emotion in them.Great rhyming as well.
"...Tell me everything's going to be alright,
Whisper sweet nothing's into my ear.
Sing me to sleep tonight,
Just keep pretending to care..."
^^I loved this stanza.Great work on these lines!
Anyway, keep writing like that!5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS