What a powerful and passionate piece you have given us to read.

Loved the flow and rhyme scheme, but they wane in the light of true love that you've put in this poem. Very well done.

jeannie

To be so in love.. This is filled with hope, for those of us still without.. Well done, as always. Your poems are beautiful. xx

Nice job sir,
i really enjoyed it. you are a great poet.5/5

Absolutely loved it! beautifully writtin

Hey there great poem keep up the great work
*shay*

Excellent work!!!

Hey that is hella good..
like bam you tottaly get a 5/5..
so can you plz read and rate mine as i done yours

I luv it, tell me more, lol

Wow very beautifully written!!...you have a wonderful way with words...keep up the good work...cant wait to see more of your writings:)5/5

Oh!!! My, written with great passion
an excellent read on doubt and lucky is
the lady you have written this poem for.
Thank you for sharing and Write On,
Bogie

I luv this poem its soooo great and its got a great ryghm 2 it!
stace
xXx

I love it but not very much sorry!!!!

Very nice and beautiful

Very powerful Poem. I can tell you put alot of thought and time placing each word in the perfect spot. You my friend have a gift to express what we all feel through your words. 5/5