So sad, but written nicely.another 5/5

I think this is definetely the best poem of yours I have read.. The descripitons were good as was the emotion and power you put into it.. The only thing I didn't like was the last line.. It didn't make sense with the rest of the poem.. Try and fix that and it will be great! 5/5

Hmm....interesting...well written. you are hitting a very good subject (bullies).

october xx

This poem actually says a lot with profound emotion. Seemingly it offers hope at the end to overcome depressing treads