Kewl..awsome poem!!! congrats on gettin ur blue poem award lucky u!! im soo jelous!! luv the lyrics!!

Awww hun that was amazing. You write really good lyrics...I have tried but I can't. I loved this, it was so catchy and very well written. I am a little worried about you though because your poetry has become like all sad...I dunno....I just hope your okay. This was really beautiful.
5.5
Breanna

Haha at first i was like..um why r u telling my to r/r/c u didnt win my contest, but i get it now:P. great poem, it was very detailed and emotional. i could sence hurt, and i can relate. 5/5