WOW!!!!!!! That is the best poem I have read from you. It was so descriptive, wow! I can't stop saying "wow". I got really into this poem. Excellent girl. I HOPE IT'S NOT ABOUT YOU!! It was very well written, rhyming was flawless and the flow was faultless. 5/5 If I could rate you higher I would!

P.S. I've written a few new poems, check them out some time k.:-) Much Love -Shannon

I loved it. So sad but please keep up the good work... writing poems.... not starving. luv ya bye

Wow. i definatly agree with all the previous comments. and i would like to tell you to stop this behavior if you do do it. i used to and it's such a bad habit to break. so cut it out and be safe even though our dumb ass socitey basically promotes it. ugh. dumb t.v.... but besides the sad content i loved this poem and for an eleven year old you have amazing talent. keep it up!

You are a fantastic writer, especially considering you are only 11. you are extremely talented! this poem was lovely, very sad but lovely.

WOW thats really good but sad. i luv ur poems and quotes

WOW thats really good but sad. i luv ur poems and quotes

Im yound 2 and i luv luv luv ur stuff. thats an amazing poem, i just hope its not about you or some one you know! such great stuff keep it up!

WOW! Girl, you are one talented chik! All your poems are very well written n all your quotes are so awesome. well done!!!!!!!

Wow i loved your poem! and i just want you to know i read all your stuff and i love it! and in your profile it says u kno we may think ur too young but the truth is i think you can never be too young ... you just have to watch out there are some not so great guys out there! well good poem
keep writing so i can keep reading!
-Taylor

Really realy REALLY good job gurl!!!!!!! wow lol comment 4 me plz keep doin dis coz u got talent luv ya xx

Really great!!! its really true...great rhyme scheme it flowed well.....great job! def keep up the good work! i'd appreciate it if u could comment on my poems
andi

Omg for being only 11 you are really talented. keep it up hunn!!

~adria*

This was beautifully written! it flowed nicely! unfortunately everything you described really does happen! i hope this isn't about you! you have talent girl! keep up the wonderful work!

~ashley~

This is a really good poem. anorexia is a very scary diease. keep writing!!
-Kelsey

PPL SHOULD WRITE MORE POEMS LIKE THIS BCAZ GIRLS THESE DAYS GO CRAZY TRYNG TO LOOSE WEIGHT WHEN THEY AER JUST FINE..GOOD JOB I REALLY LIKE UR POEMS

I love it............poem perfection

This is like the greatest poem on eating disorders ive ever read....and it is great!! 5/5 keep up good work!

Hell u may b yung but chu good. Deez lines had so much description in it. I really liked it. I hope dis isnt u in dis poem. Keep up da good work.

Stay Playa,
SC

Very sad yet very true about something that does go on in the world. =[ Good flow and vocabulary, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Actually anorexia is when your mind doesn't feel hungry, but your body needs it. throwing up your food, is being bulimic. but i loved the poem, fantastic.