Really great poem, I hope you get better if this is about yourself. I was about your age when I became anorexic-you're so young, get rid of it now before it steals more of your life! 5/5

It really paints a picture, it's really really sad, but I loved it all same!! Nice use of words and flow is great, Thanks for the comment! 5/5
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~

Wow! You have so much feeling and emotion for an 11 year old (so sry if I got the age wrong, I think that's what you said :) I mean I know plenty of 11 year old's and they could of never written something like this on such a serious and sad subject. Great job and keep it up. I'll definately keep my eye on you! :) In fact, you're going in my fav's!!! Keep it up!!!
~Midnight Sun

WOW. This Is so true about alot of people, and its a very big challenge now adays with all the models looking like a bag of bones.
but on the other hand, i loved the way you wrote it, you reall have a way with words. 5/5

That was REALLY good. i just hope that that girl ain't you b/c if it is then u should stop now b4 it gets to be a really bad habit! your only 11 and you don't wanna be like that for the rest of your life! I've read a few of your poems and they're really good....i could've never wrote anything like that when i was 11. keep up the good work and never stop writing!
~Danni~

I truly love this poem. Its one of my faves. It describes almost exactly how i feel. Well done.

Great poem, I can sadly relate to much of the stuff in it
And youre only 11, you make everyone else look bad haha

This poem is really good..ive had friends who have had to battle with eating disorders, so i can relate...great poem=]

Wow, i really like this poem, your real good