Getting Somewhere?

by Ben   Sep 9, 2006


Here I am,
Under the street light,
so far away from you.

But in my thoughts,
You're always with me,
No matter how far apart we are.

I am, I am, I am,
Finally getting somewhere.
Oh, tell me am I...
Am I finally getting somewhere?

I've had long long nights,
I've had melancholy days.
You're so far away it hurts.

When your not around,
Alcohol is my friend,
It makes me forget...
Makes me forget...

I am, I am, I am,
Finally getting somewhere.
Oh, tell me am I...
Am I finally getting somewhere?

I am, I am, I am,
Finally getting somewhere.
Oh, tell me am I...
Am I finally getting somewhere?

(c) Ben.S 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Hey ben
    i'm in english at the moment. i was bored so i thought i'd go on good ol' poems and quotes.. i like this poem. i like the way you repeat the 'i am's. it makes it sound like a song you could be singing. best of luck for the end of school. have fun at schoolies week and happy birthday. stay safe at schoolies though lol :* we want you back in one piece!
    love always
    greta xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Compared to your other stuff, this isn't AS great; it is good, but not super duper fantastic. In my own opinion, I feel there's too much of the same lines, and not enough of describing what those lines mean...know what I'm trying to say? It's still good, no kidding, I just feel it needs some more work.
    I miss you most horribly.
    Do take care, dear lovely.

    Much love,
    - -SJGxx

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