5/5! great imagery! luvd it so dark and romantic! and ur rhymes were so natural...absolutly loved it!!!

I like I... alot keep writing... 5/5
Sincerely,
Katlyn

It was SOOO great and visual

so dark and sexy;) good work!

well done
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Wonderfully penned Brit, a most delicious and exquiste drak write!!!

Nice use of language! Yu have captured an image and stuck it down on paper for all to see! Well done!

Wow, ur really good.

Very nice. your description was really good and i liked the whole fact how it made me feel like it was about a vampire - not like a kiddish one. keep up the good work!