by cherolyn Sep 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Your Last Breathe Was Slow |
Omg thats so creepy my friend just died and he has the same name..your poem made me cry and cry...well done i hope your doing okay with your loss i no i'm not doing so good with mine i miss him so much..i just can't for get about him..anyways...i love the way your words flow together and make a story 5/5 |
by just katie
Wow! That was great and it reminded me alot the story of my friend seh lost her brother in a stupid accitent and youre a great writer...keep it up! |
by Lutu
Wow! That was amazing...I almost cried in the end...great job! Keep it up! |