Wow! That was amazing...I almost cried in the end...great job! Keep it up!

Wow! That was great and it reminded me alot the story of my friend seh lost her brother in a stupid accitent and youre a great writer...keep it up!

Omg thats so creepy my friend just died and he has the same name..your poem made me cry and cry...well done i hope your doing okay with your loss i no i'm not doing so good with mine i miss him so much..i just can't for get about him..anyways...i love the way your words flow together and make a story 5/5
auna