Your Eyes

by Misstress   Sep 9, 2006


Your Eyes
Like sparkling stars
Suspended in arrays
of bursting colors in pastel
It makes me crave for letters and run free,
Yearning to change and capture them
Into a poem or song
Then my world clasp
Your Eyes

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  • 18 years ago

    by Leslie

    Nope, this is my new favorite of yours. i love it, its so quick and so prfect that you want to go back and read it through again and again. awesome job.

  • 18 years ago

    by X2892

    Another great poem u made, 5/5 again

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I loved your choice in words very sweet
    thanks for rrc on my poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I am so jelous right now. You never
    cease to amaze me. This is an excellent poem. There really isn't
    nothing more that I can say to you
    that I haven't already said. 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wonderful. I've never read a rictameter before, and i don't know the structure of it, but i like it. =] You used excellent descriptions and your words just all fit in perfectly, all in such a short poem yet again. Great work.

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