You paint a beautiful picture, well done. :)

Wow that was absolutely beautiful.. I love the descriptions and colorful use of imagery and diction. Amazing piece.. keep it up!

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

An amazing poem, another great job by you. this poem is so great.

Awh, that was sweeet! I found it a little confusing but maybe that was just me.. The flow was good and I liked the form you chose! Nicely done 5/5

Wonderful rictameter, lovely, just lovely!!!

Excellent write! It is such a unique masterpiece, and your few words held so much beauty, that I read it over and over again.

Another wonderful poem. Short and sweet yet again. You got your point across with little words, and it was amazing.

Misstress... you've done! amazing... not too long and not boring to read actaully i keep on reading thanks..5/5

Wonderful. I've never read a rictameter before, and i don't know the structure of it, but i like it. =] You used excellent descriptions and your words just all fit in perfectly, all in such a short poem yet again. Great work.

I am so jelous right now. You never
cease to amaze me. This is an excellent poem. There really isn't
nothing more that I can say to you
that I haven't already said. 5/5

Love
Letty

I loved your choice in words very sweet
thanks for rrc on my poem

Another great poem u made, 5/5 again

Nope, this is my new favorite of yours. i love it, its so quick and so prfect that you want to go back and read it through again and again. awesome job.