Smiles That Hurt {Italian Sonnet.}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Sep 9, 2006


-Smiles That Hurt.-

There's a girl in the mirror, smiling back at me!
Hiding the tears I know she has in her eyes,
Telling stories of lullabies and good-byes.
And the closer I look, the more I can see;
The innocent little girl she used to be.
And her fake smiles are all little white lies,
Because I know when she is alone, she cries,
Just praying for the day when she'll be free.

Sometimes - - I will wonder who she really is - -
And other times I think I already know.
As she stands there and stares at me, face inert.
Wondering, if anyone knows she exists.
With eyes bloodshot red, and her face of snow;
She whispers back at me, that these smiles hurt.

© Jenna Elphick
September 9, 2006

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Italian Sonnet: Composed of an octave (rhyming abbaabba) and a sestet (rhyming cdecde or cdcdcd) or, in some variant pattern, but with no closing couplet. Usually, there are 10 syllables per line, however, Italian Sonnets can also have 11 syllables per line.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Wow. your sonnet is way better than mine. but i also think that has something to do with the fact of my subject manner i was forced to write about..

    Either way- this is amazing, you really can write these well! since i read up on them i can also see the change from the octave to the sestet. Great job!

    x.oLauren

  • 17 years ago

    by FallingDownFast

    I really liked this poem... it has a good flow and feel to it.. the rythem is good... many can relate!!! great write! ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Oh, there it is. i wasn't just looking hard enough. lol. i think i really like this. it relates to me a lot! it has great descriptions and all. so, i say GREAT JOB! lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow great work. loved it. so much emotion in it, i can relate. keep it up! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Wow, real good, I've tried to write a sonnet, but I'm not good enough for it .. so really good that you can do it.. keep up this work