by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Sep 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
-Smiles That Hurt.- |
Wow. your sonnet is way better than mine. but i also think that has something to do with the fact of my subject manner i was forced to write about.. |
I really liked this poem... it has a good flow and feel to it.. the rythem is good... many can relate!!! great write! ♥ |
by xxmichaelxx
Oh, there it is. i wasn't just looking hard enough. lol. i think i really like this. it relates to me a lot! it has great descriptions and all. so, i say GREAT JOB! lol |
Wow great work. loved it. so much emotion in it, i can relate. keep it up! 5/5 |
Wow, real good, I've tried to write a sonnet, but I'm not good enough for it .. so really good that you can do it.. keep up this work |