Wow, real good, I've tried to write a sonnet, but I'm not good enough for it .. so really good that you can do it.. keep up this work

Wow great work. loved it. so much emotion in it, i can relate. keep it up! 5/5

Oh, there it is. i wasn't just looking hard enough. lol. i think i really like this. it relates to me a lot! it has great descriptions and all. so, i say GREAT JOB! lol

I really liked this poem... it has a good flow and feel to it.. the rythem is good... many can relate!!! great write! ♥

Wow. your sonnet is way better than mine. but i also think that has something to do with the fact of my subject manner i was forced to write about..

Either way- this is amazing, you really can write these well! since i read up on them i can also see the change from the octave to the sestet. Great job!

x.oLauren