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by Joow Sep 9, 2006 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
I laugh out loud But I cry silently Inside of me I hear a thunder I'm afraid Afraid of life Can't you see I need someone Someone to laugh with Someone to cry with But now there's nobody I can't laugh I only cry alone All on my own All on my own.. I feel so left alone Nobody knows where I am No one's missing me Cold water runs from my eyes And the cold is freezing I laugh out loud but inside of me I'm hurt I've never seen a light In my life How will you know I'm hurting? If you cannot see my pain? To wear it on My body tells What I cannot explain What I cannot explain... Cold water runs from my eyes And the cold is freezing The cold is freezing...
by Lady Nik
Great work shanik
by Aussie
Good poem. got a good rythme. it would be a good song. keep writing:)
by mimzy
Very nice work.. especially how you ended it.. and the line "No one's missing me" so much emotion.. 5/5