by playgroundreject Sep 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
As i lay awake |
Truly beautiful |
Hey, Great poem, well done wiht both rhyming and flow, both are nearly perfect, the only thing i would suggust is capitalise your I's. |
by kanji
Awsomw JOB |
by *IL0VEY0U*
I love it! Great JOb and Keep it up |
by David
Awesome poem! reminds me of a couple i wrote! well done!!! :) |