by Jessica Sep 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tears slowly falling down her pale cheeks |
Wow...awsome poem!! i really liked it.. |
by Esther
This is nice! kinda long but i liked it loads any-way! |
by Esther
Dat is really sad*sniff* n i really like it! |
by Lovely Bones
Whooaaa. I like this. I love how you just encorporated why she was crying in the secodn stanza like you did. That was awesome! Very good descriptions and great flow. You're quite good at these different style poems. Keep it up! |
Greatly written great job sad and beautiful 5/5 from me |