Gr8 poem. it's deep. i like how u exsplane the pain. keep writing:)

AWW, I LOVED THAT SO SWEET N SAD, WELL DONE

Very wel written I like the format which you excecuted perfectly I am moved by the sad content..... exceent work

Greatly written great job sad and beautiful 5/5 from me

Whooaaa. I like this. I love how you just encorporated why she was crying in the secodn stanza like you did. That was awesome! Very good descriptions and great flow. You're quite good at these different style poems. Keep it up!

God Bless,
Love sarah joy

Dat is really sad*sniff* n i really like it!

This is nice! kinda long but i liked it loads any-way!

Wow...awsome poem!! i really liked it..