As he left
by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ Sep 9, 2006
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Twas early one evening he left in a flash my heart torn to pieces my sorrow a clash i know he did no bad yet I'm still young hes lost in gods dusk and its no fun. to young for his funeral and for his morn my heart ripped and shredded and already worn I'm still to young only ten but hey i know alot like it was the end. the end for his life and the end for my happiness hes gone in gods dusk |
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16 years ago
by Lady Nik
Awesome poem keep up the great work love ya Shanik
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18 years ago
Thats really good...full of feelings..great job..your poems well get better and better as time goes on but for this one i give it a 5/5..keep up the good work
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18 years ago
by just katie
Wow you are a really strong writer and only ten....KEEP IT UP!
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18 years ago
by Lady Nik
For a ten year old this is really good, i'm 14. i really like how you worded it. keep up the good work. shanik
