This poemis really good.it makes you think i love how you wrote it, great work shanik

Good job. Check your spelling and grammer. You can organize the poem more too.

I think this is you BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! i love it so much..your words are amazing when there put together...it makes a great best..5/5 well done keep it up for ten years old this stuff is AWSOME,AMAZING,WONDERFUL...there is no word to explain how good they are..but just KEEP IT UP....if you do you'll go far
auna

Omg thanx so much for the comment you are such a nice person, and you have powerful poems for such a young person, keep it up shanik

AWESOME POEM i really like it keep it up much love shanik

This was so sad.....so true i tottally feel the same and relate to it...

truely lovely...