Blindess

by ~*TDG*~   Sep 9, 2006


I see him every day at school.
and when I'm around him I try to be cool.
but sometimes I dint even know if he cares.
does he even know I'm there?
I change my looks, I change my style.
I change all my self to his isle.
But does he even notice I did all that stuff just for him to see?
or does he think I'm doing this all for me?
how blind can a guy really get?
He probably just sees me as another girl I bet.
I probably shouldn't even like him, because I know him and I will never be
I just can't help but see him with me.
I know I'm not in love, because well, I just know.
but what I do know is that from my mid, he's got to go.

By Samantha G.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Hey, I didn't mean to offend you or your friend...I guess I'm just a stick in the mud when it comes to rhyming. So I apologize...just keep writing and ignore anyone who get in your way... and keep sticking up for yourself kid!
    ~Jules
    p.s. and thanks for the comment, lol :)

  • 18 years ago

    by braydens1mommy

    I liked it

    Later
    Looneybug

  • 18 years ago

    by I aM HaPPieR NoW

    Yjis is such a good poem i dont care what anyone says it is os pretty and sweet u dont need to rhym for it be a poem

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good start. Try to use more imagery and descriptions instead of "fill words" such as I, in, the, a etc... Also, your rhymes sound kind of forced. You could try free-style first.

    Keep it up^-^

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