Outcast

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Sep 9, 2006


Out-side, of the lovely world
Lonely..
...Forgotten
Abandoned..
...Withdrawn
Rejected
...Secluded
-Cast-aside,as a memory often is.

I changed this a bit.(Last Line) hope you like it. =]

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Wonderful. That's all I have to say. XD I love how both the first and last lines are long compared to the one-word lines in the middle. (Okay, so I had more to say, ha.) Anyhow, good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I liked this style you wrote with, however the last line, though it does fit, sounded a tad weird to me. I don't know why. But, overall, it was very well written and I liked it. 5/5 =]]

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I like this one, so simple yet meaningful, 5/5 again.

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