I like this one, so simple yet meaningful, 5/5 again.

I liked this style you wrote with, however the last line, though it does fit, sounded a tad weird to me. I don't know why. But, overall, it was very well written and I liked it. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

Wonderful. That's all I have to say. XD I love how both the first and last lines are long compared to the one-word lines in the middle. (Okay, so I had more to say, ha.) Anyhow, good job.