Rose.. Fire..

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Sep 9, 2006


A Rose...
Without thorns..
Can still make you bleed.
Make you scream, wither, die..
Make you fall upon your knees...

A Fire..
Without heat..
Can still cause you pain.
Cause you torment, torture, death..
Cause you to lose all you had gained...

*not done but whattaya think so far?

* the title made no sense.. i know.. lol

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really like this so far. It's flowing perfectly, and makes a lot of sense to me. Very good, keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is very well written. i like the flow of it very much. and it rhymed a little. keep it up! you have talent! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that this poem is very good so far. another 5/5 i loved it because it is true.

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Good choice of words
    with verygood lines on it.
    Excellent!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, I loved it sweetie! It was amazing.. The title would make sense if you added a stanza about liars somehow.. But so far, its great! The imagery is just beautiful.. I really liked it, keep it up! 5/5

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