I think it is good, but still you can work on it to make it better, but still i give it a 5/5

Awh, I loved it sweetie! It was amazing.. The title would make sense if you added a stanza about liars somehow.. But so far, its great! The imagery is just beautiful.. I really liked it, keep it up! 5/5

Good choice of words
with verygood lines on it.
Excellent!
5/5

I think that this poem is very good so far. another 5/5 i loved it because it is true.

Wow this is very well written. i like the flow of it very much. and it rhymed a little. keep it up! you have talent! 5/5

~Kristina

I really like this so far. It's flowing perfectly, and makes a lot of sense to me. Very good, keep it up.