This is the story of a girl...who cried a river and drown the whole world...sorry thats what the title reminded me of...neways....not ur best, but it's good.
mucho

I like it. I love the first line. Keep up the good work. I always look forward to reading your poems. =]
Much love,
Tammie xo

This poem is really good i've read some of your other poems you are an awesoem writer. your talent is outstanding. shanik