Perfect Deception

I must say you write really good dark poems, your wording and flow were right on target and I don't read many writes as captivating as yours. A unique and original piece, keep up the great work! I really enjoyed this poem, dark ones are fun to read. Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne

I think that this angel would be missed by many. nice write and very nice emotions finding their way to our eyes and hearts. peace and may your poets pen never run out of ink

I really like this one. XXX

Help me feel all these things
Take my heart and take my wings
Rip my halo right in half
Hear my new demonic laugh

Loved these lines best. Great imagery and flow.

OMG, I love it. Wow. This is sooo good. The last lines are the best.

Oh, and thanks for commenting on 'Not a Paperdoll'. It means alot that you liked it :)