Wow I really loved this...it was so beautiful. I can reallly relate to this and it was so unique. You did an amazing job on this.
5.5 for sure...I hope everything is okay.
Breanna

I loved this... i could relate to it... its not like those fake poems that some poeple try to write.. i could tell that there were emotions in it...
i hope your ok though...

This poem is incredibly good! I hope you write more like this! n if u cut ur sen, i hope u learn when to stop!

OMG, I love it. Wow. This is sooo good. The last lines are the best.

Oh, and thanks for commenting on 'Not a Paperdoll'. It means alot that you liked it :)

Help me feel all these things
Take my heart and take my wings
Rip my halo right in half
Hear my new demonic laugh

Loved these lines best. Great imagery and flow.

I really like this one. XXX

I think that this angel would be missed by many. nice write and very nice emotions finding their way to our eyes and hearts. peace and may your poets pen never run out of ink

I must say you write really good dark poems, your wording and flow were right on target and I don't read many writes as captivating as yours. A unique and original piece, keep up the great work! I really enjoyed this poem, dark ones are fun to read. Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne