Race of Life

by LovelyDivine   Sep 9, 2006


Emotions are going up and down
All you ever see is a frown.
Tears are streaming down my face
For I'll never win this race.

This race that we call life,
Filling us with nothing but strife.
Falling in love, thinking this is it,
But it doesn't seem legit.

My heart is now broken
I guess this is your token
Of how you truly feel,
Now I know it was never real.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem with great word choice and a clear message in it. Keep up the good work

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it very much. Topic is great, atmosphere is excellent and this piece is powerful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tasha

    Hey thanks for the comment, I like this poem a lot and I just read some of your poems and they remind me of well me. lol. But great 5/5

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