Wow, this is one of my favs that you have written! I liked the message and the flow was good to!! I also liked how it was short and to the point!! Good Job!!5/5!!

This is short but has mucho meaning =]] hehe. keep up the good work!!!!

Aww this poem is so sweet i love it so much!
Keep up ur great work!!
5/5
Luv FallenxFromxGrace