Is She Better?

by TRAGiC BEAUTY   Sep 10, 2006


Is she so much better than me
I'll never be the things she'll be
I will never be as perfect as her
Is that what you want, I'm not sure

When you call her better than me
It really hurts, why can't anyone see
Was I just a mistake
Am I just the one everyone hates

I know, I know, I act fine
But I don't have a thing that's mine
And she's better at everything
And I'm just not good at anything

I realize, one thing's for me
I can write poetry
I do have my own thing
I can write, she can sing

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  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    As* usual

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem. Excellent rhyming and great flow was usual. I can relate to this poem too. I enjoyed it. [5/5]

  • 18 years ago

    by Jaime

    I did get the point you were trying to make, although you went in a very different direction with this poem than I thought you would have, based on the first few stanzas.

    The rhyming was pretty basic, but it did rhyme, and it flowed smoothly through out the whole poem.

    I enjoyed this, good job.

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