You did a good job in putting your emotions on this poem..
It was a good read.

Keep yer head up high..

God Bless

I have to say this is one of your best work. great meaning, emotion, and feelings. you have done a very wonderful job, a 5/5 from me.

This poem is really good! n i hope u right many more like it even though it's kinda long!! 5/5

I really did like this one, it was really good. I think it was very descriptive although some lines ran long. It flowed okay overall. keep writing

Your descriptions were different, unique in the sense of the word, and the delicate longer sentences hold enough emotion to keep the poem flowing.

Sweet melody of the memories of love this is a moving poem

I liked reading your poem and liked the many feelings you used throughout it. With the detail i can assume it is from someone who has really hurty you. I mainly lked the part about the schedule. :-p

Loved it! its beautiful and sad at the same time, bitter sweet! i can really relate.
andi

Wonderful job! Loved it a lot! You gave great descriptions and the flow overall was good! 5/5 Keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

Wow, this was beautiful, you write such entirely believeable poems, and they flow so well, yet they are sad. 5/5
gabriella