The Lady of the Gloom

I really didn't like how this turned out... I'll probably rewrite it later on, but this is what I have for now. Tell me what you think.
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Shining green and silver moon,
Over the Lady of the Gloom,
Strike out, test her there
Across the lands so fair.
Gold and silver shining face
Looking at you with a dreading haste,
Saddened forgotten look of doom
For this Lady of the Gloom.

A picture painted across the sky,
Showing the Lady to defy;
Let go of your heart, dear Lady,
Throw it in the gloom so shady.

Show us how you died that night,
Without a thought, without a fight.
Tell us how you died under the moon,
My dear fair Lady of the Gloom.

Standing tall and standing fair,
Looking out to the land with no care;
Poor Lady of the Gloom
Sprinkling over the thoughts of your doom,
Let your heart go and outwardly cry
As the Lady of the Gloom silently dies.