Dark Poems is your forte.
Wish I could write dark poems like the way you write..
Keep it up!
and Keep yer head up high...

God Bless!

Very enchanting

Don't rewrite it! it is really good as it is!

As I was reading the second stanza I was thinking it was the best, but then I got to the third stanza, which is even better. It really tells a story, but still leaves some mystery. The flow seems to be off in a few places (across the lands so fair) (looking out to the land with no care), but maybe thats how you intended it to be.

You are the queen of darkness! as someone has already said " Dont modify" I am really loving your dark poems. Keep writing.

Wow you are really good at it I like the flow of your dark poems the rhythm and the rhyme I feel the sadness, and the message of your poems great job

and last of all I like the ending such a beautiful piece well done

geneross

I have no idea why you don't like this.
It's amazing love, so well written and very creative and powerful. I was loving it the whole time I was reading it. It was such an easy and delightful read.

Wow! This is a really, really great poem! And I really mean an excellent poem w/o any doubts you have a *gift* for writing poem this poem is my favorite one of all! Really great work. Keep it up. ^_^

It was pretty good... a little too shoppy for my tastes but still good none the less

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You are such a good writer! Goodness Shin. This one was amazing, the depth and heart you set to it, was wonderful! Lovely job, once again.