by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Sep 10, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Do you hear it sigh deep within you head? |
by Rocky
A really dark and haunting poem. but thats probably why i loved it. |
by Gabi
It's a really good poem, but you rhymed the same words a lot, like head and dead, also tread and dread. Try using different words to get the point of the poem across! You're a really good writer, keep it up! |
by lydia
Wow!!!! That is awsome!! It reminds me of halloween I love it!! |
Out to the fields of the silent and the dead, |
by X2892
Another geart poem 5/5 |