Hey, This was very unique...I loved it. I have never read a poem like this and with lesson or moral behind it. lol. It was very well writte and had a good flow. Great job...Thank you so much for the comment, although I have to say, you read two of my worst poems, I'm glad you liked them. (^_^)
5.5 on this
Breanna

Hmmm what are you saying?