by Jessica Sep 10, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Slowly moving the black pen across the paper |
Wow.......this poem is soo awsome!! a 5/5 for me.. |
Bravo. Excellently done. The flow was a bit off at times but overall a wonderful write. |
by Sophie
Good work jess. lovely poem! |
by Ye Seul
Wow.. this is very interesting poem.. i havent tried any poems like this one.. it is very well written and your stanzas flew wonderfully.. it is very emotional also... great job!! |
by Tammie
Woah thats amazing hun! Very deep and powerful. Your use of words is just wonderful. This is an excellent poem. Definately one of my favorites of yours! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more! =] 5/5 |