Pain In My Heart

by ღHazel_Kittenღ   Sep 10, 2006


He's still here, Though I wish him not
His presence almost mocks me
His voice it swears to rock me
But I quickly make way with new thoughts

He's not mine anymore, he can belong where he may
Even though I long for him
My heart pains for him
But I have to move on, here I will not stay

My eye's threaten tears as I almost run
He doesn't even look
I just wish he would look
But neither him nor I are stunned

He doesn't care and it hurts so much
My heart rips my ribs
My stomach is pierced by my ribs
And I am left in the clutch

Life or death
... A Death Wish ...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    Omg that poem is sooo wonderful.. filled with emotions that i can relate to.. it's written wonderfuly..
    keep up the great work xx

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Whoever gave this 3 vote is a moron especially when not leaving a comment and stating why

    It is written with feeling and emotion the only problem I have with this poem is the repeating of the same word instead of finding one that rhymes and you seem to be stuck on a cliche of using the word clutch

    Other than that it was a very good attempt

    (shoot I sound like an old schoolmaster) lol

    5/5

    John

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