Whoever gave this 3 vote is a moron especially when not leaving a comment and stating why

It is written with feeling and emotion the only problem I have with this poem is the repeating of the same word instead of finding one that rhymes and you seem to be stuck on a cliche of using the word clutch

Other than that it was a very good attempt

(shoot I sound like an old schoolmaster) lol

5/5

John

Omg that poem is sooo wonderful.. filled with emotions that i can relate to.. it's written wonderfuly..
keep up the great work xx