She's Gone. {Tetractys}

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Sep 10, 2006


-She's Gone.- {Tetractys}

......................There
....................Are rain
..................Drops on all
................The rose petals
....Sitting in the vase in that empty room.

© Jenna Elpick
September 10, 2006.

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Tetractys: is composed of 5 lines with a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10. You can make double Tetractys by a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. or a triple by 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10. and so on...

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  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A unique piece....very different. i like that you try diff styles of poetry, you seem to do good at them all!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Awe...Wow... I love it! This is amazing... So...different.. So... alive?... I don't know.. but god I love it. Great job! ((Sorry to say, you got downrated again...Nothing worse than a 5.0 poem!!))

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hmmm this poem makes me think deep..
    Ive nver tried this kind of poetry, and I think youve done a great job

    Definitely a 5

    God Bless

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Very nicely done! I don't know why this has been rated one for. =/ Tehe. Anywho, I love this style now, and you've done a really good job on it. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

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