Nicely done! Very good flow and the rhyming was good too. I wouldn't change a thing. Keep it up!

Natalie``

P.S. I got your email, and I'm feeling much better now. :]

Beautiful keep it up 5/5 very good way to put love great job

That was a really good poem...i wish a guy would write something like that for me

I love this poem!!
you have a very beautiiful way of writing. very romantic.
thanks for my comment!
..xx