This is really good.

- Veronica

I love it! ow, I don't even know what to say. Everything about the flow is perfect and your word choice is AMAZING! The only error I found is:
"To drown, cleaner then the knife"
then should be than

Other than that great write! Keep it up---

WoW. Thats really good. Kinda scary how someone will just let go and just do that.

Ok, bye!

love Kaitlyn